Friday, April 11, 2008


I chose to have the Air Jordan one and have my arms as the laces to show that I have love for my friends and family as well as my girlfriend. I was trying to express my love for ones I care for and would love to spend my life with. I even love you Miss Cook. I was trying to capture a loving and cool mood.
I placed my arms as the laces to show that I hold on tight to people and don’t let go. My strong focal area was the arms as the laces to show that I hold on tight like laces. My focal area is strong because it shows my feelings. My composition is balanced because I have things in right places except for my head because it don’t look to pleasing. My picture looks unifiedbut then doesn’t look unified. The arms look pretty good but the head doesn’t.
I seriously think I deserve a passing grade but not that good. It was difficult to do the arms and find a place for my head. I could have made my self more into the shoe. I would change the placement of my head and make my hanging arm hug the shoe. But I think I did well enough.

3 comments:

Jaquaisha said...

I really like you'r personal metaphor. You made you'r arms really look like a shoe lace. it blends in well with the shoe as well.

maria said...

hey i like how you made your self out of a shoe it's pretty cool....

Serge said...

I like how you made your arms become the shoe laces. Having your head in the nike symbol was a little strange to me, but it was a cool idea nonetheless.